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"Hey Roxas" Vol.1 Cover by ~MewThalia-chan:iconMewThalia-chan:

Categories Traditional Art > Drawings > Illustration > Storybook

©2008-2009 ~MewThalia-chan
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The tale of a tortured boy's search for love and happiness, filled with sorrow, royalty, magic, and a pair of glass slippers! Your favorite Kingdom Hearts characters portray an adaptation of the beloved fairy tale "Cinderella", as written by the talented author, :iconhikari-sora1:. Now your favorite yaoi fanfiction is in comic form! So whether you're new to the story, or a long time fan, I present "Hey Roxas": The Manga Version! Enjoy!!
*WARNING* If you do not like yaoi(boy on boy), I strongly suggest you do not read this comic. No flaming or angry comments please. Thank you!

Chapter 1-
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~naruton Jun 7, 2008, 12:31:52 PM
Looks like a good start, but could use some work.
Look at the body of roxas, I'd say it looks sorta "pressed together".
I'd say that you make it slightly bigger acually. And that the arms are more "behind" the upper body (Forgive my wierd way of putting things.. xD)

As for Axel. He needs to be longer! Don't be afraid of making the character too long!

I'll give you a few pointers. ^^

1; Usually with the human body, where the arm bends... If you draw a line from there onto your stomach you'll notice that it's right at your belly button.

2; The legs are usually pretty long. ._. Please check yourself. XD

^^ Um.. Anyways, keep practising! I know you can work your way up! :'D

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No matter what you see, you are still so blind to me.
:iconmusicaddictmisaki:
~MusicAddictMisaki Jun 7, 2008, 1:24:35 PM
Yes she can ! ^.^ were cheerin' you on Roxas ! and yea.. I had to take the hard ways too by listening to most people talk o.o''

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Art appears only by the Heart, and Emotions, Never by the Thought.
:iconnaruton:
~naruton Jun 7, 2008, 3:02:32 PM
Gomen! Didn't mean to be offensive or anything. ^^ Just thought as pointers.

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No matter what you see, you are still so blind to me.
:iconmewthalia-chan:
~MewThalia-chan Jun 7, 2008, 4:50:40 PM
yeah...I hate his legs XP i think it's the way I drew his pants that threw me off a bit
thx alot!! I'll remember those ^^ and I've learned to not draw important stuff half asleep XD

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"What are you?!"
"I'm the Todd."
--The Janitor and Todd (Scrubs)
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Wanna read a KH twist on Cinderella? Read this-->[link]
:iconmewthalia-chan:
~MewThalia-chan Jun 7, 2008, 4:51:31 PM
we grow from our mistakes. at least I wasn't getting slammed ^^

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"What are you?!"
"I'm the Todd."
--The Janitor and Todd (Scrubs)
----
Wanna read a KH twist on Cinderella? Read this-->[link]
:iconnaruton:
~naruton Jun 8, 2008, 2:48:38 AM
HAHAHHA XD Nawie!

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No matter what you see, you are still so blind to me.
:iconmewthalia-chan:
~MewThalia-chan Jun 8, 2008, 6:27:00 PM
LOL ^^ I'm gonna pretend I know what nawie means! ^^;

--
"What are you?!"
"I'm the Todd."
--The Janitor and Todd (Scrubs)
----
Wanna read a KH twist on Cinderella? Read this-->[link]
:iconnaruton:
~naruton Jun 9, 2008, 9:20:18 AM
o.o Nawie ain't a word... It's just.. Naaaw! How cute! Er.. Or something... XD

Mind checking out my pics too? x'3

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No matter what you see, you are still so blind to me.
:iconmewthalia-chan:
~MewThalia-chan Jun 9, 2008, 3:11:03 PM
oh, lol ^^
will do!

--
"What are you?!"
"I'm the Todd."
--The Janitor and Todd (Scrubs)
----
Wanna read a KH twist on Cinderella? Read this-->[link]
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